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PostSubject: Knight, Yukiko   Wed Apr 23, 2014 6:03 pm


Name:Knight, Yukiko
Age:18
Gender:female
Miester:N/A
Appearance:She appears as a beautiful young woman with long, light-green hair, large breasts. She were tight jeans with any shirt she have on, sometime she will only wear a bra sometime. Other times nothing on in her dorm. But mostly wear black underwear which she like the short skirt and her uniform which she have open she only have the jacket open and one button open. She have blue eyes, her body is fit but loving. She is 5'9 and have 132 pounds.

Weapon form:
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She start with the wind blade, and every 20 souls she gain a new form

Personality:is kind, caring, loyal, very loving and help her friends out sometime get confuse between a kiss and "it" but overall she is a very happy go lucky girl that love to make friends. Her emotions change the style of the blade. When she is happy it the wind, if she is sad, it the ice sword, if she is depress is the water sword and if she is angry or piss the fire sword came out. But she does hava hidden sad and depress side that come out if she fail anyone. And lasty She can embrace her sexy self everyday when she have nothing on. But mostly she is allway in a good mood to have fun and smile. But if you hurt her friends/family boyfriend or girlfriend SHE WILL HURT YOU, NOT JUST HURT SHE WILL REALLY SLAM WHOEVER HURT HER AND LOVE ONES.


Likes:Manga, walking around the park, playing the drum and free running
Dislikes:she just hate bullys and lighting

History:she is the new girl in the academy as Yukiko have just move into death city. She was born in the United Kingdom with an ok family that he like as when she was geting older her weapon side come out slowy as with time pass bye she learn that that weapon she can turn into have forms. But the catch is it link to her emotions. Becouse of that she decide to go to the academy and learn how to master the forms and the weapon. And to find her true love from it. Even with her happyness deep down there is a sad side to it. The first time it came out she thought she fail her mom and dad by geting a ok score for the sat. But her mom and dad understand it and care for her and told her that she did not fail us. But why she want to prove to herself she does not want anyone to give up on there dreams. But all good thing come to an end as her best friend kill herself. She begin to be depress becouse she thought it was herself that she is dead. But she want her friends to be happy so becouse of that she told herself to stop thinking bad things as she going to make people's happy for now on

Other:To find her true holder. Whoever is not her holder she will be stuck in her base form and with every attack the fake holder begin go get tired
Have you read the rules?
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Order:
Happy: wind form(the blade become green and wind begin to form the blade
Sad: ice form: (the blade become blue and begin to form ice on the blade
Angry/Piss: fire form (the blade become red and begin to get on fire)
Depress: water form( the blade become dark blue and begin to look water like)


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PostSubject: Re: Knight, Yukiko   Wed Apr 23, 2014 8:21 pm

Alright-y then!! I note that your character has multiple elements, and that is acceptable, but the elements must be gained as she acquires more souls. Please list the element she starts out with, how many souls are in between each new power, and in what order they are gained.
Aside from that, I would like to ask that you add more to the personality, and history. In a character whose abilities revolve around emotion, it's pretty handy to handle what gives her these emotions. Kinda like how you noted the way she becomes depressed when she believes she has failed others.
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PostSubject: Re: Knight, Yukiko   Wed Apr 23, 2014 9:11 pm

I did
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PostSubject: Re: Knight, Yukiko   Wed Apr 23, 2014 9:46 pm

Okay, handled the problem with the weapon traits, but it still leaves something to be desired. The history, and personality still look bare. If you could add 1-2 sentences to the personality(what could possible make this go lucky, self-conscious woman angry), and 3-4 to the history, you would have a good full character. Try, and find a good motivational source for the character. Maybe why she feels the need to prove herself, and what happened to cause her to react so negatively when she perceives that she's "failed".
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PostSubject: Re: Knight, Yukiko   Wed Apr 23, 2014 10:22 pm

We are good
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PostSubject: Re: Knight, Yukiko   Wed Apr 23, 2014 10:31 pm

Okay, this is a vast jump in content. Well done, I think I can say this makes the cut.

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