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PostSubject: Sutiiven WIP   Fri Nov 07, 2014 6:36 pm

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Name: first, Sutiiven

Age: 230 But he considers himself 23

Gender: boy

Animal Form: His animal form is a dark black furred wolf with a scar across his back and goes all the way down to the end of his tail. His tail is a bit fluffy.

Weapon: Sage Rosemay

Appearance: He has long black hair that partially goes over his left eye and is a bit spiky in the back. He has tan skin and has wolf type  ears and pure dark red eyes but tends to use his magic to change them to a blue color and make his ears look normal to keep from being suspicious. He is around 6' and weighs around 215 LB's and is a bit muscular. He tends to wear a black short sleeve shirt and a black denim jacket with a red trim. He always has a guitar that can detach from its leather strap.

Personality: He is strong willed and Doesn't back down from any challenge. He doesn't mind hanging out with friends but prefers just to be with his girl and avoid the public most of the time. He is kind to an extent and doesn't mind helping others. He tends to get annoyed easily. He loves to play guitar and hates being interrupted.

Likes: He likes to play guitar, hang out with his friends and girlfriend, avoiding large amounts of people, Music  (all types but tends to listen to Linkin Park), comedy, a friendly fight every now and then, and being petted and scratched behind the ears.

Dislikes: He hates high pitched noises, interruptions when he is doing something, His girlfriends ex's, Guys flirting with sage and vice versa, and people who threaten his loved ones.

History: He was born into a family of witches. But his biological dead left before he was born and the man he called father died when he was 12 which sent his mother into extreme depression. as a kid he learned how to use his powers with the help of his uncles and aunts. At the age of 13-14 he mad some friends and fell in love with this girl he knew. at the age of 16 he lost them to murder. At the age of 20 after dealing with depression until he met this dark weapon named Sage. they started talking to each other due to a friend they both had.
After a bit he finally asked her out and she said yes. for a few weeks now they have been dating and its been rough every now and then but they always seem to get it working. He is currently living in the outskirts of death city with Sage keeping her safe with his hiding spells from those who hunt them.

Spells: fur black, shoot black (allows him to shoot rays of black energy from hiss fingers. its a strong attack but takes time to use after the first try. cant use it for two more post). Scent trail, Fast trail (allows him to teleport him and two others at most to a certain destination anytime he wishes except in a fight. he would need a clear mind and cant do that in a fight, this also takes time to use after the first try. has to wait one more post). Fang sharp, Blade sharp (allows him to summon a black steel sword to fight with). Fur change, true change (allows him to change his and other appearances and hide their souls.)

Other: Dating his weapon

Have you read the rules?
"I don't know how to handle this..."


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PostSubject: Re: Sutiiven WIP   Sat Nov 08, 2014 1:15 pm

My only issues here are the spells. And it's a few quick fixes. When you say takes time, how much? One post? Two posts? As for the teleportation, can he use it to just teleport around a fight or even out of one all together? And if so, it should have some kind of activation time before it works.

Other than that, I think you're alright.

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PostSubject: Re: Sutiiven WIP   Sat Nov 08, 2014 3:45 pm

Much better. Approved.

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