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PostSubject: Stephan "Kidd" Götze   Sat Aug 30, 2014 2:32 pm

Name: Stephan "Kidd" Götze

Age: 15 Years Old.

Gender: Male.

Weapon: None yet.

Appearance: He is 5'9 and 150 lbs, with a slim, but slightly defined build. He has light brown hair that is styled up into a mohawk with 3 lines shaved on the left side. He has golden eyes. He wears glasses similar to Killik's, a golden jersey with "92" on the back in black, black leather joggers, and black combat boots. Kidd is usually seen smiling, and laughing. He stands tall and erect, complimenting his hair. He also walks with a bit of a strut, representing his urban roots.

Personality: Kidd is a very diverse person, sharing both humble and cocky traits. When it comes to combat or a simple soccer game, Kidd is a very confident and competitive person. When socializing, however, he tones down his cockiness a little bit, but still thinks he is above most of the people around him. Around friends, love interests, and DWMA staff he is a very kind and caring person, willing to put them in front before himself. At times he may seem isolated, but this is because he is a big daydreamer hoping that one day he'll be some little kids hero. A big part of his personality is his comical and optimistic side, constantly fitting humor into the most dire of situations and always blocking out the negatives with the positives.

Likes: Soccer, flirting/dating, eating, socializing.

Dislikes: Zombies, loneliness, and bullies.

History: Kidd was born in Washington DC, USA to a regular mother and meister father. He was raised in an underprivileged neighborhood where he was constantly around bad influences. Kidd didn't care that he was in the ghetto or around criminals, he always looked on the bright side, and as a result he has never suffered a day in his life. Although Kidd had a good childhood, it wasn't perfect.

Kidd was raised playing soccer, and was always praised as one of the best, if not the best youth talent in the world and a sought after winger. One of the reasons that drove him to get to where he's at, is to make his family proud, mainly his mother. Despite all his personal achievements, she always seemed disinterested or had doubts in his abilities. This has caused him pain, and drives him to go harder everyday, in hopes of making her proud someday.

Kidd had an even bigger problem with never having known his father. When he would ask his mother about him, she would never answer his questions. When he would visit his grandparents that lived in the same area, they would only respond with saying that his father had a secret talent. One day, Kidd visited his grandparents again and was digging around in their closet for whatever reason. He found a journal and scrapbook that once belonged to his father. It spoke of his father's adventures at the DWMA and the part he played in being a hero. Kidd wondered if his meister abilities were passed down, and demanded his mother enroll him at the DWMA.

Once enrolled at the DWMA, Kidd set some goals for himself. To find out if he has meister abilities or not, and hone them. To be a hero, and stand up for what's right. To have his name known in the world by every person, and be somebody's hero and role model. One day, to figure out his fathers whereabouts. And lastly but most importantly, to make his mother proud.


Other: Kidd doesn't reveal his real name to anyone, except for close friends that he trusts, and even then he prefers his nickname, but doesn't mind being refered to as "Stephan".

He is of Spanish and German descent, and is therefore fluent in Spanish, and knows a little bit of German.

He traveled out to Italy one day, offered deals to big name clubs.

His biggest attribute is speed, and this was showcased in a game once. He started sprinting from one side of the field, and vanished, appearing on the other side of the field. He concluded that he got it from his fathers side.

Current abilities:

Duplication: Kidd is able to make 10 more duplicates of himself but are just illusions, in order to have a presence of 11 on his side. (Why 11? That's the number of people on a soccer team.) The ability take some 10 minutes, and will only last 3 minutes. Duration will extend with training over time.

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Phasing: He's able to phase underground, and move 10 feet away from where he was standing. He cannot make contact with anyone or anything on the surface, he'll have to come up completely to do so. He must hold his breath and close his eyes completely while in the process of this. He is only able to use this ability twice a day. If he stays under any longer, he will risk killing himself.

Agility: Good at dodging.

Footwork: It's hard to knock him off his feet.

(I plan on having him unlock the non-physical abilities over time)

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PostSubject: Re: Stephan "Kidd" Götze   Sat Aug 30, 2014 11:34 pm

Alright, Some things, thought it looks really good so far.

I want a bit more on his appearance. It seems a bit small to me.

I kind of want you to change his personality just a bit. Maybe make him cocky out of a competition as well, but he can still be kind and caring. Like Darkwing Duck from the old 90's cartoon.

If he is going to have powers, I want them listed, just so I know they are not OP

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PostSubject: Re: Stephan "Kidd" Götze   Sat Aug 30, 2014 11:38 pm

Alright, will do. Where do I list his powers?
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PostSubject: Re: Stephan "Kidd" Götze   Sun Aug 31, 2014 10:17 am

Usually, they put them in other. If you want to make a separate section, though, I don't honestly care.

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PostSubject: Re: Stephan "Kidd" Götze   Sun Aug 31, 2014 1:10 pm

Alright, powers.

Duplication: Making 11 people to fight with you is a no-no. Even if it takes ten minutes, it's still pretty OP.

Speed: I need a defined number, and running fast enough to run on walls? No one will be able to hit him with a weapon.

Phasing underground: Still a no. It can be impossible to kill him, and if he is going to be fast, he can get away from any fight. I say this because there is not enough info for me. Is he slower when underground, can he reach his hands up and grab people, can he only travel a certain distance, how does he breathe?

I'm okay with his other abilities. Just note that he hasn't received official training since it was not stated in the history. Which means he can't dodge everything.

I'm sorry if I seem strict on you, Kidd. It's that this character is powerful, and he is just a normal human. I don't want to see how he is with eating a couple of pure souls.

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PostSubject: Re: Stephan "Kidd" Götze   Sun Aug 31, 2014 1:29 pm

Edited again. I never stated he could dodge everything, he's just fast. If any of the abilities are STILL too strong, I'll just completely get rid of them.
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PostSubject: Re: Stephan "Kidd" Götze   Sun Aug 31, 2014 2:03 pm

20 meters per a second is too fast. And it doesn't look like you changed his duplication ability. Other then those two, the rest are good.

And I know you didn't state that, I just wanted to make sure.

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PostSubject: Re: Stephan "Kidd" Götze   Sun Aug 31, 2014 3:54 pm

Edited. I made the duplicates just an illusion, don't know if you saw that. If there's any other problems, can you tell me in the chatbox?
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PostSubject: Re: Stephan "Kidd" Götze   Sun Nov 23, 2014 11:45 am

Nothing seems to be wrong with this app anymore. I'm approving, and moving it unless someone has something to contest the decision.

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