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PostSubject: Braz, The Mongrel   Mon Jul 14, 2014 12:44 pm


Name: Braz Wolf
Gender: male
Age: 18
Species: hybrid werewolf/vampire
Appearance:  Braz has two appearances; a more human-like form, and a half werewolf form. In his human-like form, he has white skin with short white hair, sticking upwards on his head. His eyes are gold, and he is very fit. His most seen outfit is a blue-and-white striped shirt, dark cargo shirts, and a forearm guard. When Braz gets over-hyped, he grows claws, a snout, and tail. This "incomplete" transformation is due to him not being a pure werewolf. However, he still grows abnormally powerful.  Because of his vampire side he retains sharp fangs while in human form and he does not bruise. Because of the vampire half of him he considers himself noble. A noticeable trait of this is his paleness when in the light and his not being affected by extremely cold temperatures. He has a noticeable scar on his cheek that is a mark from childhood.
Personality: Braz is a mildly short-tempered young man, but with great ambition. He is very powerful and strong-willed, and thinks very highly of his strength. However when he is beat he will admit that he is not stronger but continue to fight that person as he trains. He also has a soft side which is shielded from his rough outer personality. He is often serious when it comes to important matters and he is often willing to sacrifice things for his friends. He also considers himself a bit of a mongrel
Likes:Fighting, Hunting, Eating, Boxing
Dislikes:Idiots, Weaklings, Boredom,People being smarter than him.
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AbilitiesDescription
Soul CombatBraz's magic mostly affects his strength and body physically. This includes his transformation which lets him augment his physical attacks.
Wolf FormBraz can transform into his werewolf form. This gives him an immense boost in power and speed but it takes two posts to power up and if he is hit during his attempt to transform then he will revert back to normal.
KanaboHe carries around a iron rod that he can seal part of his soul wavelength into the rod. By removing part of it and putting it inside of the rod, Braz is able to keep energy outside of his body. In doing this, the iron rod becomes a magical extension of him. It affects his fighting style by changing a regular weapon swing into a superfast swing or a more damaging one.
Blood StalkerBecause of his vampire blood he  has the ability to manipulate his blood into different shapes, and is able to control the blood from any distance. He dubs this ability "Blood Stalker". This is limited to blood that he can sense. In weakened states or merely hungry ones he cannot find
Other: He can exit wolf form quickly when needed and he does so when he is knocked out
Have you read the rules?
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PostSubject: Re: Braz, The Mongrel   Sat Jul 19, 2014 10:46 pm

You're too vague with his abilities.

1. How else is his body effected. You can't just say it's physically effected and be down with it. And how much strength does he gain for it? Is it active, or passive?

2. How much is immense? Does he get the strength to lift a car with no effort, or is it that he can lift 60 more pounds or something?

3. Why does he have a magic rod? What the hell is some who's suppose to have a limited amount of magic, and even then most of it is physically, suppose to do with it?

4. Can control blood? Is it just his blood, blood that's touched Oxygen? What? And what are the limits of this? What are the shapes, what are the attributes?

And write the history.

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PostSubject: Re: Braz, The Mongrel   Sat Jul 19, 2014 10:50 pm

Understood. I'm just going to scrap this app since I made it while sick and thus it was bound to be bad. Sorry for wasting your time.

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