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PostSubject: Syrus Yashiro   Fri May 16, 2014 7:16 pm



Name: Syrus Yashiro
Age: 19
Gender: Boy
Weapon Form: Greatsword (picture above)
Miester: Currently N/A
Appearance: (Picture above.) Syrus wears a black suit, white undershirt, and dress shoes. His eyes are a pale peach color and his hair is crystal white. Skinny and somewhat tall build. Stands in great poise, avoiding slouching to his best effort. Somewhat pale skinned because he does not like to tan. His skin is also somewhat delicate, his weapon form is not. Any outfits he wears are usually somewhat expensive looking. Avoids getting his outfits dirty.
Personality: Somewhat shy at times, but he can be quite open with friends. Openly bisexual. He try's to act with the best of manners and be polite. When in combat her gets very serious. Though he gets over excited sometimes, its usually because he grew up in private land, only friends being maids. He is quite thankful to anyone whos friends with him. Usually can be even more shy around those he has a crush on. He usually likes giving gifts to show his appreciation to friends.
Likes: Books, cats, hanging out with friends, practicing, and playing violin.
Dislikes: Overall douchebags, ignorence, and being in a spot light alone.
History: Syrus grew up knowing he was a weapon and being trained as one. He also practiced his violin and read for the majority of his time. He was raised in a somewhat wealthy family, raised to be on his best manners. Once he made it into the DWMA he was overjoyed to begin. He's been unable to do anything until he gets a meister but is content to do his hobbies and other things until he can find one. Sometimes he will sit at the park hoping for a meister to take notice of him.
Other: Doesn't mind buying things for friends.
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PostSubject: Re: Syrus Yashiro   Fri May 16, 2014 7:46 pm

Note: Your characters weapon form transcends bad-ass. love it. x3

More to the point, there are a few lacking sections in the sheet. Namely appearance, and personality. 3-6 lines are the minimum in these sections. While the picture is a good way to show the characters physical appearance, a good way to add to the appearance would be how the character "carries" themselves, demeanor etc. While you have how he acts in his personality(important in itself) it would be good to see why he acts how he does. If its because he wasn't raised around people, and they make him uncomfortable, or if it's a simple extension of how he views "manners".
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PostSubject: Re: Syrus Yashiro   Fri May 16, 2014 8:10 pm

Much better!~

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