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 Hademru Inferno. The proud man's spotlight?

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PostSubject: Hademru Inferno. The proud man's spotlight?   Tue Apr 22, 2014 6:53 pm

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Name: Hademaru, Inferno
Age: is 4, looks: 18
Gender: Male
Weapon: shuke
Appearance: Hademaru has black hair, and wears a bath robe, and carries a sword with him.

Personality: Hademaru is showy, and poetic, and a "hero."  He is somewhat obsessed with the idea of being said "hero" and seeks the holy sword the Excalibur, and thus joined the academy. He is always eager to fight others, stating that his sword hand seeks to battle, a side effect of his madness. He also has the habit of giving odd names to weapons and moves, the names of which are all references to the characters of soul eater, titles, and events. He also seems to break the 4th wall a lot.

likes: Skyler, swords, hi friends.
dislikes: being too weak to defend his friends, his friends getting hurt, the fact that he is 4


History: His memories: Hademaur's parent's were killed long ago, by a Demon Weapon. When Dante Inferno killed it, she took the 2 year old baby as her own, and has raised him since. He was told of this at six, though doesn't care and sees Dante as his mom. He grew up with her, and seemed to subconsciously become more and more like a miester, learning moves/creating moves that miesters have, and even making his own. He eventually met a girl named Luci, his temporary partner, and soon to be friend. This lead to him meeting his later GF Skyra. After many problems, laughter, and arguements, they are still together, and have even done "things" with help from the sneaky punk named Yami Hoshi. What will happen now, will Hade succeed in becoming a kishin egg, or will his friends keep him on the good path.
Other: the way he has his hand covering his face in the pic is his trade mark pose
Kattana, named "Aura's Bane".
sword miester: His specialty is using swords, whether it's a regular sword or a human weapon, he is better at wielding it then most people. (basically he has mastery over sword play, and can resonate with sword weapon MUCH easier)
5 ancient ones: This is one of his "Amazing Sword Techniques". In it he attacks 5 consecutive times, each at a random location.
Medium soul: His souls is big for his age, but not to big, barely fitting around his arms.
Fast Soul Wavelength: His soul wavelength is fast, and as so he himself is very quick, this plays a key role in "Holy speed finisher". He can move as a blur naturally.
Holy speed finisher: another of his "amazing sword techniques." It is his finisher move, in this he preforms self soul resonance, and does a flash step at the target, aiming for the jugular.
Sid's crawling approach: this technique sends him underground, and while underground is out of sight, even by soul sight.
Soul Eater: another of his "amazing sword techniques." He get's ready to attack the opponent, delivering a spiral cut, which give the outline of a scythe when he does. Moves like a blur.
Black*Star: another of his "amazing sword techniques." He uses his speed to move quickly through the field at a specific opponent, then cuts them.
Soul sight: What he refers to soul perception as. Picture Speed*Star as far as speed
Holy speed: This is a form of self soul resonance, like soul menace, but used to increase speed for a one move attack or movement. It is seen as a flash step, and the begining move in "Holy speed finisher" and "Death the Kid". In combat this can only be used 1 time,  any past will damage his soul. For travel he can uses this an unlimited amount of times, not retreating though. Can move in total about the average lawn.
Death the Kid: another of his "amazing sword techniques." He cuts the target straight down the middle with Holy speed, cutting them perfectly symmetrically, thus it's name.
"ALRIGHT BROTHER! LET'S GO! HOLY SOUL RESONANCE!"


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PostSubject: Re: Hademru Inferno. The proud man's spotlight?   Fri Apr 25, 2014 5:45 pm

Okay, other than the general dis-array of the app, you missed the like/dislikes part of the app. As well, I believe madness is a psychological condition. It wouldn't effect his physiology, just the way he perceived things. Also, if you could better define his sword skills. "Better than most" can mean a lot. Is he better than most, inexperienced/novice/proficient/masters? Also, one the Speed Finisher it is said he can "flash step". Generally this means he can teleport in the blink of an eye. With no cool down, and/or preparation time this quickly becomes OP. Finally if you could provide ranges for the moves, and define high speeds.

These requests probably seem pretty chaotic, and/or short tempered, but it's really just my mind being scattered due to the 4 distractions I told you about. >~<

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PostSubject: Re: Hademru Inferno. The proud man's spotlight?   Fri Apr 25, 2014 5:57 pm

fixxed.
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PostSubject: Re: Hademru Inferno. The proud man's spotlight?   Fri Apr 25, 2014 6:48 pm

You probably need to add a cool down to the holy speed finisher, as well as range, to keep it from being OP. Also being able to use it only 3 times per thread is questionable enough for something moving faster than the human eye can perceive. Considering retreating is "travel", your OC will be impossible to catch, and therefore kill. Also, I would say it should be a resonance technique. Pointing out Black*Stars superhuman strength due to madness, I can allow the durable body, but would prefer for that to be a resonance tech as well.

Again, sorry if I seem short. ;~;

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PostSubject: Re: Hademru Inferno. The proud man's spotlight?   Fri Apr 25, 2014 7:00 pm

got rid of madness fixxed,
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PostSubject: Re: Hademru Inferno. The proud man's spotlight?   Fri Apr 25, 2014 7:10 pm

Okay then, everything here seems acceptable! Thank you for your patience.

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