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PostSubject: Cold, cold, heart... ( Ready! )   Wed Apr 30, 2014 7:21 pm

Name: clockwork.
Age: 80
Gender: Male.
Miester:  N/A
Themes:
http://youtu.be/EtbuUlSGXzc
http://youtu.be/3aF9AJm0RFc
Appearance: A ten foot tall golem like creature made of hammered bronze with steam leaking out of the gears. It glows internally indicating fire inside. Hammered bronze armor with the shape of a powerful mans muscular chest hammered in. His head is covered by a Spartan like helmet. The helmet is bolted to him and does not move. However his face has five emotions carved into five sides, Cushing sadness, unstoppable rage, terrified fear, blissful happiness, and quiet neutrality. His legs look like heavy armor just as the top does.

Personality: clockwork hates everyone equally, blacks, whites, Hispanics, the old, the sick, the young, the healthy. He harbors resentment for all of them. He has never gotten to know anyone, because of this he always sees the worst in people. He can learn to love, but someone would have to dig through all the hate piled up on him his entire life. He is wickedly smart, and always does what's best for him or what hinders others. Particularly witches or the dwma. He doesn't mind animals however, humanity is what he really hates. Some people just want to watch the world burn, and Clockwork is definitely one of them.

Likes: Causing others pain. Animals and technology.

Dislikes: He is harboring of every prejudice you can name off the top of your head.

History: Once upon a time, a band of witches kidnapped a old man in the Alaskan tundra. They were after him because he was a weapon, that of a suit of armor. They forced him using magic to stay in that form. After years of toil Johnny casino lost his humanity. In his place, clockwork came into being. Clockwork was made of many souls, all brought together in the " Soul engine " That is his mechanical heart. The Witches that made him began construction exactly eight years ago. They wanted to end the threat to the d.w.m.a with a weapon that could evolve. So they made him in Alaska, far away from any prying eyes and over the course of the years gathered only fifteen hateful souls. On his sixth " Birthday " He awoke. They warped his mind and soul with torture and subliminal messages. All the magic they had at their disposal didn't do anything to help him either. They made his life a living hell, he can't remember a single day he wasn't in pain. Either emotionally or physically. But it did the trick, it made him cold and toughened him up. But one day, the light of the fires of hatred fueled his escape. Right now he is running through the artic tundra trying to escape. Should he do so then he will give everyone the one gift that he can muster... His hatred.

Other: swords slide from his lower arms as weapons, rambolts can shoot out of his feet either to stomp or to keep him I place with enough traction to stop a car. He is capable of great feats of strength, lifting cars in his huge hands and throwing them. But without a meister he is so slow! That is his fatal weakness. Any competent weapon meister pair  an run circles around this guy. However if he does have a meister that he can draw power from then he is much faster and he can even sprint. ( albeit with an awful turning radius ) seeing this giant charge you is as absolutely terrifying. Can change his soul from that of a kishen in appearance to that of an innocent soul.

Weaknesses: In battle clockwork is in constant danger of overheating. When someone says something that makes him mad, sad, or scared then he gets hotter. When he performs works of strength, sprints, or exerts himself then he heats up. When he overheats he can open up to vent heat faster, but that exposes his heart and makes him super vulnerable. If he gets to hot he can shut down, and as he gets hotter his meister becomes in danger of frying. You can defeat him by calling him bad names.
extreme slowness. A meister helps this somewhat but he won't be winning any footraces in his lifetime.
ram bolts leave him locked in place, making him resilient to crushing but vulnerable to blades or precision weapons. This can stop a car or allow him to hold something beyond his normal limits, but if a bus or something really heavy comes along then it will squish him into the pavement.
Armor can deflect most attacks the first time around but if they keep on being landed in the same place then the armor can wear out and become a weak point.
vulnerable while a meister is getting in.
If someone is powerful enough, either with their soul or body. Then they could force command of him and use his body as a weapon until he can either fry them or throw them out.
Vulnerable to piggyback riders.
Lets go soul resonance!


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PostSubject: Re: Cold, cold, heart... ( Ready! )   Sun May 04, 2014 8:12 pm

It's never even shown that a golem can weild a weapon, let alone be one. And before you point to the colen that weilded the chainsaw man, let me point out that the spider witch was possessing the golem, and therefore, as witches can be meisters, it makes some sense. all weapons in the series to my knowledge were humans. So that kind of hugely impacts the character. As such I need an admin to post their opinion here.

Add to that, to my limited knowledge, golems are not sentient naturally...

Your personality and history both need lengthened, add some more lines to them, at least 2 each.

Please space them out, as your character is all scrunched up, which makes it more irksome to read.

Yeah I need an admin to give their opinion on if this is even viable at all. But by myself, I'd say no if it was only up to me.
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PostSubject: Re: Cold, cold, heart... ( Ready! )   Sun May 04, 2014 8:21 pm

On second thought I should have put golem like creature instead of golem on appearance. He's kind of half and half, golem and dark weapon. He became sentient naturally because he was a sentient when the witches caught him. Using the enchantment gloves they built upon his armor weapon form adding more souls that way he would stay sentient. He cannot turn back into a human, so he is stuck as a dark weapon.

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PostSubject: Re: Cold, cold, heart... ( Ready! )   Sun May 04, 2014 9:05 pm

Okay then, please follow the instructions above. This app hs not been suspended because it's actively being worked on.
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PostSubject: Re: Cold, cold, heart... ( Ready! )   Sun May 04, 2014 9:06 pm

( : Did that as soon as I read your post.

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PostSubject: Re: Cold, cold, heart... ( Ready! )   Tue May 06, 2014 3:36 pm

While Jess seems to handle this,I would like to point out that the app would be easily read if you spaced out the sections.Not trying to sound bitchy,but I am merely suggesting it.

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