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PostSubject: Jet Tucker (done)   Sat Apr 26, 2014 11:29 pm

Jet Tucker

Gender
Male

Age
16

Meister
None

Weapon Form
Rapier

Crush
none

Boyfriend/Girlfriend
None

Resonation:
Thunder collumns the meister holds Jet back handed throws their arm forward Jet's blade slicing across the ground in a arc at the foe

Description
wears a hoodie all the time black hair dark brown eyes tan skin always carries his guitar case except on mission

Personality
Crazy loyal sarcastic humorous musician doesn't let anyone get hurt for him

History
was "lost in the dessert as a child and made his way back to The DWMA unknowingly he found his familiues house but it was burned down. Recently he had lost his arm n a carr explosion so he was taken to a hosptal where they put a robotic prosthetic arm on in exchange for his own

Other
Wears gauntlets all the time. As of recently his right arm is robotic and so has had some mechanical / technical training from it
Soul shape and color
The color is gray and the soul has a calm yet fierce look to it also has wolf ears for his history

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PostSubject: Re: Jet Tucker (done)   Sun Apr 27, 2014 2:12 am

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PostSubject: Re: Jet Tucker (done)   Mon Apr 28, 2014 7:12 pm

I'm sorry but this is far from done sadly. Firstly... This is fairly obvious, no offense meant, but use the right template.

Secondly, the history, appearance, personality, asside from being the wrong template, is far too short. Improve all three. Give me at least 5x more on the appearance and personality, and at least 3x more on the history.

I have great doubts as to the robotic arm, and you failed to give any real information on it. Please edit the application to include these things.
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